This is my first summer learning Journey activity that I am posting on my blog. We had the choice of to do three activities. I choice to do the moon poem. Here is my moon poem.
This is my funny poem.
The cow went to the moon.
He soon hit a spoon covered with doom.
Eh! Eh! Eh! he cried as he could't get out.
This poem is about what I felt on the moon.
I landed on the moon.
I felt frightened on the moon.
I felt disappeared on the moon.
I felt being stuck by the lighting on
the moon.
Then I felt brave on the moon.
ReplyDeleteMālō e lelei Ibrahim, I hope you are having a superb day!
My name is Eliza and I’m working as a blog commenter on the Summer Learning Journey this summer. Have you done the Summer Learning Journey before? I’m looking forward to reading your posts and the other bloggers' posts from the Ako Hiko cluster, over the next few weeks! If you want to know more about me, you can check out my blog.
Thank you for doing week one, day two, activity two! I thought your poem was really well thought through and I like how you have made some words rhyme at the start. It’s also really great how you’ve added an image - it makes your post more eye-catching and effective, and will bring more people to your blog :)
I’m sure Neil Armstrong would’ve felt all of those things when he first set foot on the moon. If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you go?
Ka pai for making a great post, keep up the awesome mahi!
Eliza :)