My Favorite Piece of Writing.
Kia ora bloggers around the world🌍👈, today I will be blogging about my favorite piece of writing I did this week. But first of you all know that Auckland is at alert level 3, hope you bloggers are happy and well. I was really happy when I heard that Auckland will be at alert level 3 because takeaways would open,yum! Anyways the piece of writing I did was called "Ruin". This week I had to watch a video and then write a new report or I could finish the story. I wrote different descriptive writing. The site where I got to watch all the different films was called 'Literacy Shed'. Here is the link to the site: www.literacyshed.com. But my favorite piece of writing was "Ruin". My task was to watch the video first and then finish the story. When I watched the video I was really impressed because the animation👍 of the movie was amazing. The movie was a short film. I actually really enjoyed watching the movie it was really fun. After watching it I made a new doc and started finishing the story. The piece of writing that I did was really short because the film was really short. When I finished my descriptive I was really excited because I was gonna blog about it. I think you bloggers should do the same thing it's really fun. I had to also describe what they are doing in the story. The movie was really interesting. It was my favorite short animation movie. You should watch the movie too. I actually really enjoyed watching different films this week. Hope you bloggers are happy that Auckland is at alert level three and I also hope you got something from the takeaways.
Down below is my descriptive writing enjoy reading it, and also if you want to watch the flim click on the photo down below, have fun watching the movie. Please leave comments. We also had a "l" letter syndicate meet this time. This week I was dressed as a lion! The meet was really fun. Have a great day and stay safe.🦺
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Click on the photo to watch the film.
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Great blogging Ibrahim. It sounds like you really enjoyed watching this short video and making up your own ending. Its great when you can get creative. It also sounds like you are really pleased to be at level 3 and the possibility of takeaways. Enjoy! Keep up your awesome efforts.
ReplyDeleteHi Ibrahim. You wrote an interesting piece about about a man on a bike using some good adjectives. I wish you had used more as he wasn’t just on a bike! ( I watched the video second) There was suspense and panic and action and the surroundings to describe. Did we know how the rider was feeling? I can see why you enjoyed the video! Carry on reading and writing with extra detail. Thanks for sharing and being so involved in your learning.
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